Monday, January 09, 2006

Pasha

When Pasha walked his innocent gait, the twinkling lights of the city danced down the streets with him; each the harbinger of a happy day, singing a glorious surrender to the youth of his gait, a joyful laughter at the inspiration in his eyes. Pasha smiled back. He smiled at the men who built this city. He smiled at their pride and their spirit - to the testament of their power. For this one moment, Pasha wished there were a God in heaven, for He would have lowered His head in quiet homage to Man.

9 Comments:

Blogger Semperviva said...

HEy !!! i like the last sentence of this! ! !

1/09/2006 10:50:00 AM  
Blogger Ergo Sum said...

Yeah, me too! :)
But I struggled with the choice of words for that last sentence... I kept repeating it out loud to hear the rhythm... I was torn between choosing "he would have BOWED His head" versus "He would have LOWERED His head"..

In the end, obviously, the latter won out. I thought, "lowering" the Almighty seemed much more powerful than merely "bowing".

1/09/2006 11:41:00 AM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

yes! definetely! lowered has more power... i think it has to do with the sound of the word... when you say lower you kindof lower your voice in saying t so it naturally effects a feeling in the sound of it (stressed, unstressed)LOWer

1/09/2006 12:16:00 PM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

haha it was funny when mike an i saw the movie i was like "which one do u find more atractive?" and he's like "jake gyllenthal" and i'm like "NO WAY uh-uh, no no no def. heath ledger" and me and him were like arguing over who is more attractive hahahaaa :D

1/09/2006 12:18:00 PM  
Blogger Ergo Sum said...

I have to agree with Mike... Jake Gyllenhal is certainly MORE... WAY MORE... attractive than Heath Ledger... but, hey, if Heath is all I get, I won't complain at all! ;)

1/09/2006 12:42:00 PM  
Blogger Ergo Sum said...

I think it's something to do with his eyes... and his eyebrows... Jake's... they're very... hmmm.... androgenously masculine... and sexy.... ha! ;)

1/09/2006 12:43:00 PM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

HAHAHAHAHA eeeeeeuuuw I find him gross looking HAHAHA Gay attraction is so fascinatingly weird. Heath Ledge is such a MAN! His attractive-ness is more in his presence, charisma and his VOICE then his objective features... haha!

1/09/2006 12:54:00 PM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

androgenously masculine


very interesting

1/09/2006 12:58:00 PM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

ahahah oh yeh another funny thing there's a "scene" with anne hathaway (the girl who plays the princess in that kid's disney movie) and jake. and mike's like "after this i'll never look at the princess diaries the same way again" :D lol

1/09/2006 02:31:00 PM  

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