Thursday, August 18, 2005

Blew me away

-- Edgar En el rincón que me ves llorando-- alli mi vida se esconde. Quando ya no esté mi rincón se convertira, poco a poco, en Tú rincón de lagrimas. ======= English Translation ======== The corner in which I stand, as you watch me crying-- my life is hidden there. When I am gone, my corner will become, bit by bit, your corner of tears

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Blogger Ergo Sum said...

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8/18/2005 05:38:00 PM  
Blogger Ergo Sum said...

This very short poem, written by Edgar "Drama" Piedra, I feel takes away from all of my poems any semblance of deep emotional expression.
The power of this poem, I think, lies in its brevity.
I decided to post my comment on the poem separately, so as to leave its impact untouched.

My favorite line in this poem: "my life is hidden there"

8/18/2005 05:40:00 PM  

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