Thursday, July 14, 2005

Silhouette Romance: Comment and Interpretation

I think your line should remain as an observation of my poem, like you observing my observation! I love your interpretation though: The replacement of the sun as the center of my life -- observable, palpable, yet so unreachable! Real and close yet so distant. Do I yearn so much to get so close to it, that I am willing to feel the raw blisters of heat on my skin? Is that even possible though? Can it happen? Will it happen? It seems like the pain is inevitable: either by getting closer and being burned, or by having to stay at an agonizing distance, yearning forever. The pain seems inevitable.


Blogger innommable said...

Je ne comprends pas ce drame obscur.

7/14/2005 10:36:00 PM  
Blogger Semperviva said...

Como estai? i like the poems you post best of all..they are the only thing you say in which i agree with everything!!!!! stick to them....then we would always agree..but then again, where's the fun in that anyways? ;)

7/15/2005 01:16:00 AM  
Blogger BossMack said...

What's cracking, Thanks for checking out "TopMackNigga" tha blog. My writing is esoteric, a mixture of slang and twenty dollar words, I force the reader to think. I will start fucking with your site also, you seem to be poetic.

7/15/2005 11:54:00 PM  
Blogger innommable said...

ummm.... You checked out TopMackNigga???? Did you post a comment or something??? That guy is SOMETHIN' ELSE!

7/18/2005 02:37:00 AM  

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